Creepy Poem

>> Wednesday, June 24, 2009

[It would seem there is yet much angst in my happy little bohemian soul. Apologies about the title. I couldn't stop myself.]

I look down
to see, my feet
are not my own.
My fingers are
melting, slowly, dripping
Like candle wax.
Hot puddles on the mosaic.
My eyelids
are heavy, hung
It is so cold.
Drenched in misery and self-loathing,
Who have I become?

12 comments:

Jyo Had3s June 24, 2009 at 9:30 PM  

You have become the Wicked Witch from the Wizard of Oz and you are "Meltinnnng!".... get your monkey's to save you!

awynash June 24, 2009 at 9:31 PM  

wax zombie...:P

Shuchi Grover June 24, 2009 at 10:00 PM  

A weird lump of something?

Varnika Kapoor June 24, 2009 at 10:12 PM  

scares meeeee...................

Vishal 'Tommy' Thomas June 25, 2009 at 2:34 AM  

lmao! :) house of wax effect :P .

Nor June 25, 2009 at 1:41 PM  

:) It is rather odd-ish, isn't it?

Toon Indian July 3, 2009 at 12:51 PM  

self introspection...nice blog keep it up!!

Anonymous July 25, 2009 at 9:48 PM  

A mutant ?

Anonymous July 27, 2009 at 9:17 PM  

that is really graphic - i like the way ur able to write out that feeling of angst that grows into emptiness in so few lines, with so much force.

Ire July 29, 2009 at 8:48 PM  

You remind me of Calvin&Hobbes and his weird tangent of imaginations. Cool!

Nor August 1, 2009 at 12:45 PM  

Rahul, Enjundia -- thank you.
Gazafi, a *freak* mutant :),
and Nikki, that is the nicest thing I've been told in a long time!

ani_aset August 12, 2009 at 12:05 AM  

ahan that was quiet straight :)

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